So here's my attempt,
A mate She sought in He.
Two parts of stone, never meant to be,
Like bricks like clay, lay astrayed indeed.Two hearts two souls, too much too soon,
Crushed to pieces, all set to doom.One ring one touch, one hope she sought.
A parting letter was all she got.She cried all night, and then all day.
Little she knew, he'd end up gay.
Oh, Come on!! Like you could have resisted that ending.
10 comments:
hehe...
"thanks for the consideration, mate
but i prefer a different kinda date" :D
so very profound and thought provoking i must say so....
Manuscrypts whats with the australian accent? met someone special huh?
@ Anonymous Stupid people - I have IP tracking on all my websites and servers, and it takes me 10 seconds to map you right at the capital.
And i have comment notification in my inbox, so, deleting stuff here, wont help..
Just my 2 cents.
g.w
lol..love the last part.
nice write up.
Cheers!
ending is great :)))
u shd write more! thanks for visiting.
so ur back after almost a year! and i was beginning to think u had died or sumthing!
welcome back.
LOL...this was hillarious...!!!!
ha ha...reminds me of Konkona Sen's condition in 'Life in a Metro'....lol !
A very very nice attempt for a novice i must say..maybe i should try my hand at 'haasya kavita'..eh ?
And the day I'm gonna do that, I am gonna give the entire inspirational credits to you.. he he !!!
LOL nice :)
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